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UOP1_Project/Assets/Tutorials/Tutorial Welcome Page.asset

   m_Title:
     m_Untranslated: 
   m_Description:
-    m_Untranslated: 'The project you are exploring is part of <b>Open Projects,</b>
-      an initiative where Unity and the community collaborate together to create
-      a small open-source game demo.
+    m_Untranslated: 'Welcome to Chop Chop! This game is part of <b>Open Projects,</b>
+      where Unity and the community collaborate on small, open-source game demos.
+      
-      Since it''s meant to emulate a real,
-      small action-adventure game, Chop Chop can be a complex project to explore.
-      To get started, learn how to build, create new playable locations and more,
-      the <a href="https://github.com/UnityTechnologies/open-project-1/wiki">wiki</a>
-      is a great starting point.
+      Chop
+      Chop is meant to represent a small action-adventure game demo, so you might
+      find the project complex at first. <a href="https://github.com/UnityTechnologies/open-project-1/wiki">Explore
+      the wiki</a> to learn all about its components and find out how to get started.
+      
-      You can find other useful links in the dedicated
-      window (Tutorials > Show Tutorials).'
+      You
+      can find other useful links in the dedicated window (<b>Tutorials</b> > <b>Show
+      Tutorials</b>).'
   m_Buttons:
   - Text:
       m_Untranslated: Close

UOP1_Project/Assets/Tutorials/Tutorials.asset

     Heading:
       m_Untranslated: Github repository
     Text:
-      m_Untranslated: The latest source code and assets
+      m_Untranslated: Get the latest source code and assets
     Metadata: 
     Url: https://github.com/UnityTechnologies/open-project-1
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     Heading:
       m_Untranslated: Project roadmap
     Text:
-      m_Untranslated: Explore what the team and the community is working on
+      m_Untranslated: Explore the current priorities for this game
     Metadata: 
     Url: https://open.codecks.io/unity-open-project-1
     Image: {fileID: 2800000, guid: ca31f73820d2ac4439c22bb4609f82c8, type: 3}
       m_Untranslated: Wiki
     Text:
-      m_Untranslated: In-depth information about how the game is constructed
+      m_Untranslated: Learn more about how the game is constructed
     Metadata: 
     Url: https://github.com/UnityTechnologies/open-project-1/wiki
     Image: {fileID: 2800000, guid: ca31f73820d2ac4439c22bb4609f82c8, type: 3}
       m_Untranslated: YouTube content
     Text:
-      m_Untranslated: Follow the journey with the livestreams, or look back on the
-        development with the Devlogs
+      m_Untranslated: Follow the Chop Chop journey, from livestreams to devlogs
     Metadata: 
     Url: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLX2vGYjWbI0S6CnkDm0AwVgA6E6L_vJNf
     Image: {fileID: 2800000, guid: ca31f73820d2ac4439c22bb4609f82c8, type: 3}
       m_Untranslated: Contribution guidelines
     Text:
-      m_Untranslated: The starting point if you want to contribute to Chop Chop
+      m_Untranslated: Want to join in? Start here!
     Metadata: 
     Url: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PwBF4yQl69RxvVHZ2m2iiy5pYjd9QO-VcuXWDjB7QwA/edit#
     Image: {fileID: 2800000, guid: ca31f73820d2ac4439c22bb4609f82c8, type: 3}